Really wish the sound design/voice acting had a bit more polish, because it's clearly the weakest link and holds the whole production back from its full potential. Still, it's nice to see you branching out a bit in tackling some 3D. I think it works well for the camera movements you've got here, but it does feel like it's missing some of that visual flair from your 2D stuff that you can see in the storyboards.
Excited to see what you'll get up to with your next animation though! There's a lot of potential here! :)